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Posts by Amadeus‭

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Q&A Computer science academic conference paper using "randvar" instead of "random variable"

I peer review many papers; half a dozen this year. If it is defined before the first use (e.g. "For brevity we use 'randvar' to specify random variables, 'logvar' to specify logical variables.") t...

posted 5y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  edited 5y ago by Amadeus‭

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Q&A How do I introduce dark themes?

The fourth chapter is too late. You need to do this within the first 10% of the story (by page count), anything more is too late. If your MC does violent things for good reason, you need to give t...

posted 5y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Doubt about a particular point of view on how to do character creation

How can a creation of your mind (a character) do something that you don't imagine? Implications. I will explain! What I imagine when designing my characters is scenes, things they have done in t...

posted 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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Q&A How to write strategy and schemes beyond my real-life capabilities?

You have an advantage that people in the moment do not have: You have all the time in the world to think it through, and you can time-travel to the past to fix anything that goes wrong. I wrote a ...

posted 5y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How can a writer point out the merits of his or her own work?

Generally you are correct, your piece has to be judged by readers to be clever, in order to be considered clever by the public. Entities with a larger budget can buy advertising that (without attr...

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Q&A Non-sense question about plot structures

Every story is different (or it is just plagiarism); "plot structures" come from generalizing stories and the types of events that occur in them. There are serious analysts that claim there are on...

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Q&A Idea overflow in plotting?

You have to analyze your own writing. You are weaving together three things. The Plot, the basic events that force characters to take actions. eventX happens, charA respond with eventY, leading ...

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Q&A Does my protagonist need to be the most important character?

IN GENERAL for the modern novel, the MC is the one with a problem to solve, the MC has to take the risks, and the MC has to solve the problem. One exception to this rule I can think of is Dr. Wats...

posted 5y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Letting a (secondary) antagonist leave mid story - Should it be avoided?

Your story has to make sense, the plot has to make sense. It has to seem like the characters are making realistic decisions for their situation, with their goals. What they say and do cannot come ...

posted 5y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Describing the taste of food

Is this considered a bad writing habit, or is it all a matter of opinion? I consider it mediocre writing. I don't think it is possible to write actual taste experiences, at best you can refer ...

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Q&A How many character flaws can the main character overcome?

OP: Can all three of these character flaws be resolved? Probably. OP: Is there a general rule to determine how many character flaws can be fixed? No, it all depends on how clever you are in ...

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Q&A Documenting framework features and descriptions

Personally I use Latex, more specifically pdflatex, which is free to download. It is text-based, learning it will probably take a week or two, but there are online examples and help through StackEx...

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Q&A First or third person

I don't think readers notice 3rd person view as another character observing the MC. I have read many books written in 3PL (3rd person limited; narrator only knows the thoughts and feelings of the ...

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Q&A Using fake swear words without them seeming out of place to the reader

First, I would not do the "translation" of your last sentence. Second, you need to understand that swear words are typically one or two syllables, and the audio effect needs to be somewhat similar...

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Q&A Is it a good idea to leave minor world details to the reader's imagination?

Is it a good idea to leave those things to the reader's imagination? No. This is not good writing, to compare something we know to something we don't know is backwards, at best the reader will m...

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Q&A Should you only use colons and full stops in dialogues?

For writing fiction, I don't use semicolons in dialogue (spoken or thoughts) and I don't use it in prose. That said, I am in Galastel's camp on other forms of punctuation indicating to the reader...

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Q&A Leaving wiggling room for your characters while avoiding contradictions

I am a discovery writer, I make 90% of the story up as I go along, so I do what you are doing (inventing background, thoughts, feelings, biases and attitudes, etc) constantly. However, anytime I d...

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Q&A Is there any difference between these two sentences? (Adverbs)

The reason for the "adverbs are the devil" rule is they are generally "telling", not "showing". The reason we want to "show" instead of "tell" is that it is the writer's job to assist the imaginat...

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Q&A How could the disregard for both plot and dialogue tell the story?

I think you are not writing a story, you are writing a vignette that captures a moment; this is more akin to poetry or a painting or a song or photography, those all (aim to) capture a feeling, emo...

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Q&A How to organize ideas to start writing a novel?

My answer to The Psychology of Starting a Piece of Writing is a guide to getting started. Other answers there are good as well. This will explain how to get going on the first line, first scene, fi...

posted 5y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  edited 4y ago by Canina‭

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Q&A Can a fight scene, component-wise, be too complex and complicated?

Can a fight scene, component-wise, be too complex and complicated? In general I don't think so. If by "component-wise" you mean the motivations and back-stories of the people fighting it, the on...

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Q&A Averting Real Women Don’t Wear Dresses

I don't understand the dilemma, just write it the way you want. Ultimately if you want a strong women that embraces her femininity, you are going to put her in a dress, have her pay attention to he...

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Q&A How to make a villain fall in love?

Falling in love is generally a combination of sexual attraction, complementarity, and commonality. Friendship is often founded on the last two; i.e. it is minus sexual attraction. Complementarity...

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Q&A Personal or impersonal in a technical resume

I would skip the poetry, but use the personal approach. Project X I had several duties on this project. My primary responsibility was mixing dangerous chemicals in a cauldron for various e...

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Q&A How to answer questions about my characters?

The "lie" can be just an untruth that she accepts. Here, the untruth can be that she knows the way to happiness. She thinks that by expanding her husbands land and wealth, this will keep her fami...

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