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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Hardware-based Word Processor

Do they still make hardware-based word processors? I would like a portable, no-frills dedicated machine for writing. The Neo from Alpha Smart looks close but $150 seems excessive for calculator p...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's the benefit of using invented languages in-story?

I'm working on a fictional story set in a fantastical (although coherent) universe. I'm used to seeing invented languages in works like this: Tolkien's languages for The Lord of the Rings, or Paoli...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by iajrz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How should I approach possibly unfamiliar pop culture in fiction?

So sometimes I get an idea that forms specifically around some aspect of pop culture. They're often song lyrics. If the reader knows the song, they appreciate the symbolism and allegory or whatev...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Turnips‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to describe the point-of-view character without using mirrors

In fiction, the main character is often the first person we meet in the story. Given that the story is written from his/her point of view, how would you describe what they look like? The classica...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Koen Van Damme‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Dialog, just what's the best way to write it?

I've come across the following conventions: "What’s this for?" asked Jake. Sue replied, "None of your business." He shrugged his shoulders. "Well, it looks darned funny sitting here." "It...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by srcspider‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's a good writing software for Android phones/tablets?

Everyone once in a while while I'm out I come up with something I want to add to my story. Are there any good writing apps for Android phones and tablets? Most places that recommend mobile writing ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Signs of Bad Character Development

When creating a character, what red flags would show me that I'm creating an unbelievable or unsympathetic character? I know that to be believable and sympathetic a character must not lean too muc...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's a good program for tracking submissions?

What's a good program or technique for tracking submissions? I need something that'll keep track of who I've submitted to, when, if they've replied, and preferably tell me how long it's been out. A...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Finding the 'voice' of a character

This is a very general question that I want to throw out there just to get some insight into different approaches used. I have my own, but am intrigued to know what others might try. I'm wondering...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ian‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do fullscreen writing environments help for writing? Why? [closed]

I recently found out about full-screen writing applications like OmniWriter and DarkRoom and I'm interested in using them, but I'm skeptical as to whether or not these are actually useful for impro...

8 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mana‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When should a chapter end?

When writing a novel, when should I end a chapter? Note that I'm not talking about chapter word-count (that topic was discussed here). I'm interested to know when should I end my chapters conceptu...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ido Tamir‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Good Outlining Solutions For OSX?

I write technical non-fiction and find that I cannot write well without first constructing a detailed (10-20 page) outline. Are there any good outlining solutions for OSX? Apps? Templates in Micros...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Wolf's Dilemma‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Character with extreme manners

My objective is Victorian-style tea-drinking "upper class" lady characters. (It's more of a writing challenge.) Does anyone have any useful resources or tips for creating such a character? Persona...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by srcspider‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How should dialog be formatted?

Is there any "official" rule that I should keep in mind when formatting character dialog? Line breaks, placement of quotes, mixing dialog with action descriptions etc. For example, I want to build...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ido Tamir‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I construct a plot out of my many setting/character details?

In my creative writing, I typically am inspired by short interactions between things: An overheard conversation. A person's jealousy of a friend's talent. A humorous misinterpretation... I tend to...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by JYelton‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to make a letter interesting?

I have a question regarding the art of letter writing. I believe in the old-fashioned way of maintaining pen friendships (not necessarily a relationship, but could be) through hand-written letters...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Victor123‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I write poems in an attractable manner?

I have written several poems, but only very few won prices. Those poems impressed people very much, so I want you to share your thoughts, what are the key things I have to focus on or I have to kee...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Sankar Ganesh‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Different kinds of editors

I've noticed references to different kinds of editors such as copy editor, line editor and development editor. I'd like to know the different categories of editors and their job descriptions.

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Sky Red‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What does "Exposition and Ammunition – back story" mean in screenwriting?

I am just starting my first screen writing class and I got an assignment that says: Exposition and Ammunition – back story. I have been searching online but I don't get it. Can someone explain it f...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's the best way to show a foreign language in a manuscript?

What's the best way to show a character speaking a foreign language in a fiction manuscript? Should the foreign words be italicized and include a translation? Should it just be included in the sent...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should one blog in a few languages?

Greetings. I've been blogging for a while now and I do it in Russian. But, some of my English-speaking... AHEM "Internet-friends" are unable to read my personal blog, 'cause they're just not famili...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexey Shatygin‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do episodes of the show House follow a constant structural pattern?

I've seen a few episodes of House M.D., and I wonder, are the episodes written according to a fixed structural pattern? If so, what are the details, and why does such a structure make the show pop...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by blueberryfields‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why does an author need an editor?

I'm firmly in the camp of "your novel needs an editor, and that editor better not be yourself." But recently I was asked why that was, and I couldn't articulate an answer that was passable. Youn...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by gmoore‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Editors: Edit on first read, or read and edit on second round?

I edit novels (among other works). I was having a discussion with someone (not an editor) who didn't understand my technique. What I do is read through the document, and the moment something occu...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous?

Notes: My audience knows that adrenaline and epinephrine are synonyms. I'm new! I'm sorry if I abuse the site by posting this! Please critique ruthlessly. I would send by Facebook message to a...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by user1372‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How difficult is it to break into screenwriting?

Is it difficult to get anyone to buy a screenplay you write? I am thinking about writing a screenplay but am concerned that maybe I shouldn't waste my time; I have no formal training in writing sc...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Philip White‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing first programming book

I was recently asked if I was interested in writing a book for a pretty reputable publisher, which of course I accepted. I am not a writer by trade, I am a software developer with some technical wr...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Nodey The Node Guy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using uncommon abbreviations

Something which I see all the time in (popular) science writing is the use of abbreviations to indicate concepts. For (a made up) example: So when we're dealing with Anachronistic Meta Mechanic...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by David Rutten‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there any techniques that make complexity work?

One for the creative writers, although I suppose a lateral shift might put it within reach of journalists/technical writers. As authors we all want to write, I would imagine: Something that many...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by One Monkey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How To Avoid Using Cliches In Storylines?

How is it possible to avoid cliches in storylines that you are writing? Obviously, there are external sources of influences as you read more and more. It would be possible that we are subconsciousl...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by JFW‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How common *are* happy endings?

I'm curious. After reading some other questions, I've been pondering about the frequency and reason for happy endings. That is, a positive and/or hopeful ending, even if not everything went right, ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Nick Bedford‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there good tips on being a better *creative* writer?

I'm a student at Case, and while we of course have an English department, it seems the only kind of writing classes/courses available are for learning to be either a "literary" writer, or a "schola...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Billy ONeal‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do evil protagonists win the reader over in dark fantasy stories? [closed]

I thought about writing fantasy story from the perspective of the evil antagonist (think from Sauron's perspective). So my bad guy will be the protagonist and my good guys will be the antagonist. I...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to avoid hearing "that's me!" from your friends when they read your characters?

I recently asked about getting inside of someone else's head for writing good characters who are noticeably different from myself and received some great answers. One answer suggested that you sho...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Critique: Intro/Prologue to my Novel-in-Progress

all. Please forgive me, for I'm afraid I'm a novice when it comes to writing fiction. I wanted to get the community's thoughts and recommendations for improving the below passage. I realize it n...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Matt Caldwell‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Verb tense for technical document titles

I'm writing a technical manual about creating database systems, and wondered what is the best verb tense for title names. My ideas are: Continuous (-ing) form: (e.g. "Creating a Cluster", "Creat...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Adam Matan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What can I do to improve my concentration when reading? [closed]

(I hope this is sufficiently on-topic - couldn't find anywhere else in Stack Exchange more suitable...) Currently I am having to do a lot of reading of academic papers - some dry stuff but not exc...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mark Gibaud‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Resources on plotting mystery stories

I'm looking for books, essays and articles on plotting mystery/detective/investigation stories (and novels). The type of story I'm aiming for is in the vein of Sherlock Holmes, Agatha Christie, or ...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What disciplines/habits are used to stay focussed on one novel over a long period of time?

One of my biggest issues is staying focussed on a single novel. My imagination is always creating new and wonderful ideas. I write a few chapters on this story, a few on that story, but never fin...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Stu Andrews‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Tips for humor writing

Are there any techniques you can use while brainstorming to find humor to include in an article?

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Gary‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Dashes vs. Commas vs. parentheses?

Occasionally I write sentences containing subparts with extra information. I never know how to block off this information from the rest of the sentence. Three ways I have seen are dashes, commas, a...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Wolf's Dilemma‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do online writing classes really help?

Almost all online writing workshops/classes/programs websites have scores of testimonials from students. It is very difficult to understand whether these really are students or paid testimonials. S...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by RKhan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How does one go about publishing erotica, and how far is too far?

I write erotica, it started out as an amusement to see how far I could go, but it became a real passion after three or four stories. I have even published a few online and those stories have become...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Evil Spork‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing your last will and testament

Coming from a background where I've only ever seen readings of a last will and testament in movies, what kind of style would be expected of such a document? Some personal stuff and then legalese g...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by l0b0‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Finding before/after examples where writing has been improved, to learn from

I'd like to see a series of example paragraphs, showing before/after a rewrite, to give me specific examples of how writing can be improved. Is there anywhere that shows such things? I once read t...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Magnus Smith‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What to do about noun clusters

A personal frustration of mine is when I see a cluster of nouns sitting together in a sentence. I usually see these in highly technical emails, but not exclusively. Here is a particularly bad ex...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Garrett Bluma‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Short Story first or skip to Screenplay

I'm planning to shoot and direct my own short, small budget science fiction movie as a long term project to learn more about movie making. However, I'm at the very start where I need to write a dr...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by GateKiller‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write a polite reminder email?

What guidelines and language should be used to write a polite reminder email. Ideally I would like it to be: Respectful Not too formal In particular I am thinking in terms of business, and comm...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Kyle Brandt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write great movie review?

What should we write in a movie review?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by pramodc84‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to handle foreign military ranks?

Suppose you have a character who has a rank in a foreign military - say, Feldwebel Hans. That's the equivalent of a Sergeant. On one hand, having people call him "Herr Feldwebel" gives some flavor...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by ggambett‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭