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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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How can I shorten a piece of writing effectively? [duplicate]

I always face the problem of word limit. How can I shorten a piece of writing without causing its original essence to mar? How can I be effective in doing that? Are there any general rules? For ex...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Stacy‭  ·  closed as duplicate 4y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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How to write a book from NOT the main character's POV and then organically switch the main character

How can you write a book from the point of view of a character who is not the main character and introduce the main character later on, who you want the story to focus on? How do I do this in an or...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Stupidzombiet ‭  ·  last activity 3mo ago by Mithical‭

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Can overwriting be made to look intentional from a first-person narrative?

I am an aspiring author, trying to get my 80,000-word traditionally published, though I will self-publish it if that doesn't work out. this article suggests that we avoid it altogether. I've used ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by HeavenlyHarmony‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are the different types of characters in a fictional story?

I want to be able to correctly categorise and identify different characters in a story, predominantly fiction. I have read a lot about different types of characters--flat, round, static, dynamic, p...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by N.Houghton‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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MS Word: images and lists break paragraph formatting

I've set up styles so that my paragraphs under level 4 headings stick together. To this end, I've set "Widow/Orphan control", "Keep with next", and "Keep lines together" for both the 4th heading st...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Harnex‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When am I using "I" too much?

Chuck Palahniuk is an author quite well known for writing first-person stories. He has a simple piece of advice for others who wish to do so as well: "Have your narrator say 'I' as little as possib...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by thanby‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What type of writing do reviews fall under?

I want to improve my ability to not only write better but to be more objective and be better able to analyze something that I am reviewing. Plenty of practice is helping and also reading over revie...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Dan Hastings‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Will an unrealistic character be out of place among other realistic ones?

Most of the characters in my story are well thought out and have realistic motivations and backstories, as I think most people agree that believable characters are important in writing (if you’re g...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Grace‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it a common practice to provide a chapter/section reference from the next volume in a series to the previous?

When writing a series of fiction books in which characters, universe, and events are closely related, is it a common practice in English publications to provide a footnote kind of reference, for ex...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by user42094‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Subfigures in a figure, how to label?

So if I later refer to figure 2 (i) or figure 2 (ii) would it be better for the figure to be labelled as is Figure 2: Figure (i) shows cycle C? or Figure 2: (i) shows cycle C or Figure 2: ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Hao S‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Character and world building in less than 2000 words

Is it possible to build a new character and/or world in a science fiction under a tight word limit? What aspects should be covered and what avoided? Also are there some similar previous examples to...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Abdul Rehman‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Is quality of writing subjective, or objective?

When someone says that writing is good or bad, better or worse, is it merely a way to talk about whether something is popular, or interesting to you? Or is there more to it than that? Compare the...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Jedediah‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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How can I research non-recent 21st century cultural events?

I'm currently writing a story taking place in the recent past in which (aside from the main plot) my characters get to spend some time in a big city. They end up visiting the tourist joints but als...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Llewellyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to start a story after the inciting incident?

My novel starts with the three heroes joining a cattle drive. When they talk among themselves, it's obvious that they have some kind of hidden agenda. We'll learn more about thier secret mission ov...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Shawn V. Wilson‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by DPT‭

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How to identify a (personal) Canon Sue?

Sometimes (as an intelligent species, and therefore creative, speculative about reality and so on...) we want to experience some situations which aren't possible at all. Then as a writer you can cr...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by M.N.Raia‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Examples of dialog beats and bookism

I was wondering if there is a list of ideas on how to add beats to dialog. For example: "Listen to me!", John said excitedly. "We can sell all these coins now and get rich today." He got clos...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Ari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What methods can I use to improve my English writing skills? [closed]

everyone! I'm just an English learner now, but I intend to use English in my career. I suppose everyone knows requirements to pass one of common English tests. Also I wish I became a student of a ...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Артем Малышев‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What style should I write a torture scene in?

The premise of my scene is basically that MC is electrocuted by scientists trying to trigger some sort of power in him. I've been writing his view (3rd person) the whole time before, alas I'm only ...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Mina‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can we use a title that alludes the opposite of what we're arguing for?

Let's say you decide to claim that time is absolute and not relative as Einstein said. Can you still use a title like "Einstein's time", "Relativity of time", "The geometry of time", "Time dilatati...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by deliguy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it a copyright violation to have the character share some characteristics with a known character?

More specifically, consider the following examples: 1) Say my protagonist is a boy who has a lightning-bolt scar on his forehead, wears round glasses, and has dark hair and green eyes. His name is ...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Adyescu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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How can I have a character introduce themselves as humble without making them seem arrogant?

Two people are dating, and one of them wants to tell the other they are humble, which they genuinely are. But I don't want it to seem like they're bragging or showing off about it. In normal conv...

5 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by jazhang‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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How to write as a Neko Character [closed]

So my character is a Neko, which is half human and half cat, and I use her a lot in fighting scenes and I was wondering if anyone really knows how one could write that out, I assume that the fighti...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Lillian Barnes‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it acceptable in academic writing to write "their very self" or "very + [noun]"?

Is the "very + [noun]" structure, as an emphasis on the noun, formal-enough for an academic paper? For example in the sentence below: "The environment had a significant impact on the state of his ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by nra‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Secespitus‭

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Advice for indicating sources in tables

I'm writing a thesis about the Accords by the Basel Committee on Banking Supervision (BCBS). If I put a table exactly from the Accords, I write in the table note "Source: BCBS (year)". If I start...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by CarLaTeX‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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Do scenes, sequels, and MRUs apply to mystery novels?

I'm in the process of writing a mystery novel/novella and it conforms to the traditional/classic mystery novel, emulating that of Agatha Christie or A.C. Doyle. I'm having doubts as to the proper w...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Raj Narayanan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Male, but can handle only female protagonists

I’m trying to improve my writing skills, doing both original works and facfiction, but there is a peculiar limitation to what I achieve. Despite being male, I fail to write from a male perspective ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Alexander Z.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can a writer point out the merits of his or her own work?

It is generally taken that if I tell you a joke, then have it explain why it's funny - it's not probably not funny. I continually return to one of my own short pieces. If I submit it I believe it ...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Surtsey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Dangers of being sympathetic to the killer

I wrote a piece of flash fiction as a mental exercise. I happened to listen to Glen Miller’s “Moonlight Serenade,” and happened to watch an episode of “Samurai Jack.” “Moonlight Serenade” is a so...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Dave Harris‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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Non-sense question about plot structures

Suppose then you have an story in your mind. Then, to write down this finite series of events, you have to translate your imagination into the paper. This process isn't trivial, of course and plot ...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by M.N.Raia‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Need help cleaning up a sentence [closed]

I'm having trouble with a particular sentence in my book. I had originally written: Monica’s group of friends was a diverse mixture of race, gender, and background. Having once been described as l...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Morne Rooschuz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where to put acronym/abbreviation explanation?

I'm writing my thesis, and I use some acronyms in it. For example "MDBs" = "Multilateral Development Banks". Usually, I write "Multilateral Development Banks (MDBs)" the first time I cite it and ...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by CarLaTeX‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using a prominent phrase from the title of a film in the body of an article, essay or paper, without referencing the title

I'll start with a clear example. You are writing an essay about the film The Wizard of Oz. Following the rules of titles, you put the film title in italics whenever you use it. But then you use t...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Kat‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Idea overflow in plotting?

I've been working on a paranormal/romance/mystery kind of novel for over 4 years now and still haven't finished it. It all started out as a fanfiction but I decided that it had too much potential (...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by AlexSkellington‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Kevin‭

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I've just found that my character has similar characteristics to another with the same name

I have been developing a story for some months based upon a fictional character that i thought I had invented uniquely ... let's say a half zebra half elephant for example. I named it elezebra. I t...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by AgentDavid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Awkward language translation

So I’m currently writing a book that takes place in Finland, though I am American and speak English. My main character’s name can be used as a play on words, and people use it to mock him throughou...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by T.Alb314‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to find an editor to my poems?

I have written some poems, is there a way to get them edited before I send them to publish. What services can be preferred for editing by a Publishing Company?

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Sarath‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Correct use of "Call for Proposals" in plural context

I'm trying to correctly refer to several calls. Meaning, in a singular call, we invite several proposals. Therefore, it's a call for proposals. In the case I need assistance with, my gut tells me ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Ahmed Sagarwala‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I make it so that my story isn't resolved so easily? [closed]

I'm writing a screenplay for a project in my film studies class and I'm close to resolving the conflict, but as I near the end, it feels like it's being resolved far too easily. In summary, the st...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Jodast‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do we simplify descriptions when they sound weird?

The woman said as she pulled a small coin out of a small wallet ... The woman said as she pulled a small coin out of a small box she opened/used earlier. I am wondering if "opened" or "use...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by woxim‭  ·  reopened 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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Can you pitch an outline?

Here's my question: can you pitch an outline of a novel to an agent? I.e. you have two to three chapters complete to a high standard and at full outline of the rest. Would any agents agree to re...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by peanut‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Difference between Abstract, Introduction and Conclusion in a research paper

I have found some similar questions here but they were about the difference between Abstract and Introduction without the Conclusion. So, what difference between Abstract, Introduction from one s...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Leox‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are the rules for punctuating a conversation?

Are there hard and fast rules for characters speaking to each other? As far as quotations, or without them? Are they hinged inside a paragraph or ruled to only be in a talking string?

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by M.E. Rollins‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a difference between historical fiction and creative non-fiction?

I have seen two similar terms, historical fiction and creative non-fiction. I'm writing some stories that are set during a real time in history, that might mention real events, real people, but tha...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Village‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it the right call to title my romance a 'legend'?

I am writing a book and I plan to call it "Legend of (name of the protagonist)". But I'm writing in first person (protagonist). Searching the meaning of the word "legend" in google I get: "a tradit...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Vinicius Morais‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's a good, multi-platform writing app? (that's not Google docs or Evernote)

Sorry if this question has been asked a lot I've been writing for a year now and have used both Google docs and Evernote and found them both to be lacking Google docs: I'm a writer who likes to f...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to plausibly write a character with a hidden skill

TLDR How to keep a character's skillset hidden, when it will be key in the story later on? This must be done without magic and as subtly as humanly possible. I am working on a medieval fantasy ...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by J Crosby‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Double lies as sources of conflict in a single arc

My protagonist lives with a deep lie that causes internal conflict and pain throughout the story but it basically cannot fuel any struggle to the external plot. This subconsciously motivates the ch...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Kiratta‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to identify whether a publisher is genuine or not?

Despite an identical title: This question is in no means duplicate of this question. In my local area, there have been various ads running on social media that invite novice writers to contribute ...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Karan Desai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I introduce dark themes?

My story involves a superhuman organization that aims to overthrow the main government, through any means necessary. This involves murder and some rather gruesome deaths. Additionally, there might ...

5 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by overlord - Reinstate Monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Two footnote numbering sequences

Inspired by this question, a more complex question: how can I have two simultaneous sequences of footnotes? For example, suppose I am translating a book. The book contains footnotes, numbered in s...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭