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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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What is one way to write about feeling someone's sadness? [closed]

For example: I sensed as if he became sad from the way he spoke after telling him that I would go with her.

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Emilia March‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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As a new author, is it possible to sell a book to a publisher within one or two weeks after you've finished writing it?

I know it normally takes several months to get an agent and then a contract. But are there any shortcuts, any particular companies that one can submit to directly and get a much faster evaluation? ...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by user394536‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should we avoid writing fiction about historical events without extensive research?

I was thinking about writing about the Holocaust, but I am not sure if it's a good idea since I am not sure if people would feel offended if I exaggerate certain events or facts even if it makes th...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing a trilogy and editing [closed]

I planned out to write a trilogy and the first draft of book one is now completed. I want to know if I should edit this draft before starting on the second book.

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Shellz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Describing paralyzing fear in the first person

I would appreciate some suggestions that would help me describe intense terrifying fear that my main character feels when the airplane he is on suddenly goes into a seemingly out of control dive th...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Tris‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I say that someone is black?

Sorry if this is an ancient solved problem to ask in 2019, but I googled about this and Quora isn't really answering me. I searched for the words black and race and politically as key-words on thi...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it bad to have no gender variety?

The majority of stories, movies, shows, comics, and other media I've read or seen have a pretty even split between men and women, and that's fine, I don't have a problem with it. But if I want t...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do I really need a platform to sell my novel?

Every piece of writer's advice I see will include something about "building a following" online, so that a publisher will be more likely to pick you up. The problem is, I don't have any idea how to...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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mice don't tap and tablet-users don't click: what word can I use for all audiences instead?

I am documenting features on a web site. The audience is end users, who could be anywhere from seasoned Internet veterans to relatively new people who came for my site's content but aren't general...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  edited 3y ago by Canina‭

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Incorporating new people into a critique group

I belong to a terrific critique group (writing group) that has dealt with a lot of attrition. We started with 6 people and currently have 4, one who joined after the first month or two. We also h...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Cyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I use made-up words for spells? [closed]

I put work into making up my own names for spells. However, I feel like they come across as childish when I read over my writing This was also my impression when re-reading Harry Potter. It really...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write an inversion of a messianic trope? [closed]

I want to do a story revolving around the inverse of the Christian tale in the bible. In it, the savior sent by God is tempted by the adversary, similar to how Jesus is tempted by the devil in the ...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Incognito‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we write a movie script with a view towards establishing all of the visual symbolisms and how they should be interpreted?

How do we write a movie script with a view towards establishing all of the visual symbolisms and how they should be interpreted? Often, movie scripts often only have dialogues and some very brief ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there any benefit when writing out instructions to split it up into lots of little paragraphs, or is it better to leave it in one paragraph?

I was putting together an instruction page (for setting up a game that my business created), which included a whole lot of various pointers, most of which were only a sentence or two long. These ex...

3 answers  ·  posted 3y ago by Mithical‭  ·  last activity 3y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Is it confusing to name a chapter after a non-POV character?

I've got another chapter title question. In the first chapter of my story, a significant secondary character is introduced, and I think it makes sense to use the character's name as the chapter ti...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Llewellyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I write a "take action" scene for a play?

Here is what I mean. My character- Violet- started the play with a lofty attitude, but now her pride has been broken by her mother's death and betrayal of a friend. The scene begins with her reunit...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Ariel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When is using a simile better than giving a literal description?

Definition of simile : a figure of speech comparing two unlike things that is often introduced by like or as (as in cheeks like roses) Similes are nice tools that every narrator has (eve...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can I use Stephen Hawking's name in my Science fiction book? [closed]

I wrote a science fiction book in which, Alien species comes on earth and they meet with Dr. Stephen Hawking. Is it legal to use his name for the book?

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Niranjan Mahajan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is in scope for criticizing technical writing

I'm not well versed in technical writing. I'm probably not going to be in a position to give anyone feedback for some time, but I would like to know how to approach it when I get there. I would als...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Job description for my employment reference

I've canceled my job to move on. Now I was asked how I want my Job description for my employment reference. My first draft was one full page... This is too much. Now I've reduced the long version ...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by masterchris_99‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where to put a description of software tools used in a thesis?

At the moment I'm writing my master-thesis in the area of information systems. Because I developed some code to demonstrate my approach, I also mention some software tools in my proof-of-concept se...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by So S‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What can I ask my readers to help me and how?

I have a growing non-fiction blog about challenging existing dogmas in my culture, and it has been attracting a good amount of readers. However its growth is still not optimal, as they just read or...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Ooker‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Syntax summaries use brackets for optional elements; how do I represent literal brackets in a way readers will understand?

In our documentation of SQL functions and statements, we include a BNF-style syntax summary. As is conventional, we indicate optional elements in square brackets, like this: CREATE [IF NOT EXISTS]...

4 answers  ·  posted 3y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 3y ago by Derek Elkins‭

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Is it okay to majorly distort historical facts while writing a fiction story?

Suppose A is a famous historical character with a known history of emotional attachment with a particular set of people. If I would want to write a fictional story about character A that might invo...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Karan Desai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it ok to use long footnotes?

In my text, I have a footnote (6 or 7 lines) that is meant to be an extra insight. It does seem, however, to be a bit large for a footnote. On the other hand, if I try to place it inside the text...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Jak‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a balance between a page-turning read and an exhausting 'too much' reading experience?

I have learned over the past fifteen months of writing fiction that every scene needs to have tension and advance the plot. This is good. But, I find that as I read my novel (again and again) to ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by DPT‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write a vulnerable moment without it seeming cliche or mushy?

So, I have a kinda loudmouthed character who's always the first to fight and first to go on the offensive (This is a fantasy, so she fights a lot.) But, later in the story, she comes across someone...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Ending a line of dialogue with "?!": Allowed or obnoxious?

A dialogue of mine contains the following sentence: "You fired all three of them?!" Trouble is, I'm not sure I've ever seen a novel that used a question mark and an exclamation point together...

5 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Evil Sparrow‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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The excessive use of 'and'

The word 'and' is an indispensable conjoining tool in any form and discipline of writing. Although, a repetition of the word can make a paragraph too tedious to read, and it only lengthens a senten...

5 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Chagat Nahn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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How to balance male protagonist sensitivity to women

My MC is an assassin by trade and has a military background - sniper, Special Ops, etc. He was raised partly by his sister after their parents died in a car accident. He normally listens to her as ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to describe a fist bump explosion?

I'm having trouble describing a fist bump explosion in my story. I can't just say "they did a fist bump explosion," because everyone may not know exactly what that looks like. Googling doesn't re...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kelvinator‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In-text citations for a source with no page numbers

I'm using online sources for an essay for my DE History course, and we're required to use in-text citations when we quote or paraphrase sources, with the format of author-page number, like (Johnson...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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MLA: Source Author has the same name as me

For a paper that I am writing, I have encountered an issue in which one of my sources has the same last name as myself, of which in in-text citations, makes it appear as if I am citing myself. Do I...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Josef Daniels‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you keep track of projects/ideas until you have time to write them down?

I've read the answers to this question but they focus on getting ideas written down pretty much as they occur, that's not my issue, I have both digital and analog methods for doing so with me at al...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Referencing another company's product in my product manual

I'm making a manual that references a product that is not mine. What would be the correct way to note this? I'll give an example of a common product (this isn't mine, but it's a similar idea). Ex....

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Charles‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can show that my cold hearted character is coping with grief?

I have a little contradiction in my story that may well be fatal. In my high sci-fi setting, one of my main characters is an android. Let's call him Bob. Bob is efficient, cold and straight-to-th...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Creating fictional names - bands, hotels and companies

There are a nice plethora of "how do I create a name for my fictional country/area/character" but I can't see anything for band names or companies or hotels. Is there a good system to use to avoid...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Puffafish‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Introducing a new POV near the end of a story

This question is strongly related to this one: Balance between character's point of views However, that question is asking about balancing POVs in general, whereas this one is about potentially su...

6 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Llewellyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by DPT‭

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Sentence starters for summaries?

I'm writing a technical book (step-by-step sort of book) and noticed that all my summaries start with 'In this chapter we ...'. What would be some other sentence starters that I could use to make t...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Iris Classon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do I need to change the title of my book because it is similar to the Transformers Universe?

I used the name Primus and Primes for my book and these are from the transformers universe. My concept is totally different. Is this a copyright infringement? I introduced a secret society named ...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Niranjan Mahajan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Don't look at what I did there

This question is about hiding from the reader the fact that I am skipping some steps. Worse, perhaps, I don't want to show them, and I may have no clue or intention of figuring out how these steps ...

10 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Awkward language translation

So I’m currently writing a book that takes place in Finland, though I am American and speak English. My main character’s name can be used as a play on words, and people use it to mock him throughou...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by T.Alb314‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What meta-properties should a character have in general? [closed]

What are the properties a generic main character from a character-driven/psychological novel should have? E.g. relations, motives, personality, knowledge.

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Marina Miyaoka‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can someone publish a story that happened to you?

Can someone take a story that happened to you, without your knowledge, and publish it? Using your name and specifics, and take the copyright for it? A person, whose mother lived in our small town,...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Juli Ridgway‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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I gave my characters names that are exactly like another book. Is it a problem?

Ok, so, I am currently writing a book and 3 of my characters have the same name as in another novel. I didn't realize it until someone pointed it out to me. The names I picked are fairly common and...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by WidePen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do I need to start off my book by describing the character's "normal world"?

I know a lot of books do it (Harry Potter, LOTR, Wheel of Time). It's even part of the "Hero's Journey". However, my book starts with the "inciting incidient" i.e. my main charatcer begins her firs...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Best practice for academic writing: write and cite or write first?

I'm an undergraduate student of psychology. My teachers assign writing assignments from time to time, and usually require some minimum of cited sources in APA format (as expected). When I start wr...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Shokhet‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we get Flare to stop modifying .gitignore?

We use Madcap Flare for our documentation, and the project is checked into git. (In case this matters, this is a locally-hosted git server, not GitHub.) The project uses a .gitignore file to aver...

1 answer  ·  posted 3y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 3y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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Finding out about other countries' military day-to-day

Where does one go to find out about the day-to-day of military life? In countries other than my own? I don't mean combat - I mean the boring routine. Basic training. What kind of food is served in ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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PoD services that do hardcovers of custom dimensions?

Which print-on-demand (PoD) services allow creating hardcover books of arbitrary dimensions (e.g., 115 × 157 mm)? I'm looking to print 60 copies.

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Geremia‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭