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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Suggestions on fine-nibbed fountain pens that retain moisture well, or trouble-shooting of mine, which don't

I grew up in Germany, where we were required to write in fountain pen from second grade on (fourth grade for math). I do dip-pen calligraphy and various kinds of ink-based artwork, as well as writi...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Stephanie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to organize distinct topics in personal letters to friends and family?

I often exchange long letters with family and close friends living far away every 1-2 months to stay connected and give updates on our lives. One characteristic of such a letter/long email is that...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Tom Bennett‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In-text Citations: Same Paragraph With 3-5 Authors

In nearing the completion of a piece of writing, a question has come up. With the APA format for referencing, consider the following example in a single paragraph. .... in the act of breathing ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Steven‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Would this character be classified as an antivillain, antihero, or something else entirely?

From an analysis standpoint, I'm trying to determine what classification the antagonist and protagonist in my story would fall under in terms of the classic literary labels of "hero," "villain," "a...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by stix‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Good ways to sort "rambly" notes?

I know there is a name for this kind of "writing", but I just can't think of it at the moment. Basically, most of my notes are endlessly long ramblings that can go from one place to another in a he...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by noClue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write a sincerely religious protagonist without preaching or affirming or judging their worldview?

I am writing a book in which one of my main characters is a devout Catholic. His struggles with reconciling his religion and his experiences in life are crucial to his character and I'd like to por...

6 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by wordsworth‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing Longer Flashbacks

In my story my MC has suffered a severe injury and has no recollection of who he was before it occurred. He knows what happened and where he was when it occurred as he was told by the people who fo...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by J Crosby‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Storyboarding Approaches for the Non-Artistic

TLDR: Tips and Tricks for storyboarding a novel? For someone who can't draw well enough to do the "Draw and describe method" Hello, having read the "Storyboard a Novel?" as well as some sources ...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by J Crosby‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Magic is the twist

It feels silly to say, but I've got myself into a bit of a bind of a side project. In a three-act structure (not what everyone uses, but a good reference point) you generally need to set up all ex...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Weckar E.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Which tools are recommended for writing/authoring with? [closed]

I have to following tools available, looking for other options. Microsoft Word Sublime Text Editor Atom Visual Code I'm a Software Engineer, who is interested in writing. Thanks in advance.

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Dean Van Greunen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do I have to mention my main character's age?

I finished my novel and realised that I never mentioned my main character's age. In chapter two I said that she in in her twenties, but that's the only mention of her age. I know that she is twenty...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Lymaba‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Has anyone ever written a novel or short story composed of only dialogue? [closed]

The participants describe everything needed for the story to continue, within the conversation. The environment, the emotions, everything. The reader gets to "see" it all through their words. Has i...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Daydah‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Term for future-tense technique that isn't exactly foreshadowing

Not sure if this has a name, but I think it's best demonstrated with some examples I've seen: Nadia and her family both considered her thereafter to be without a family, something all of them, ...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by purpleladydragons‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A thesaurus that detects rhyming

I have been looking for a word that rhymes with post with similar meaning to a school. But I go to thesaurus.com, sounding the words on my head for results under "school" and none rhyme. I then tr...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Jossie Calderon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Developing a dialogue that unexpectedly leads to strong feelings between two strangers

A short story I'm writing involves a stage in which the male protagonist talks to a stranger with the intent of asking them to do a favor for his friend. I want them to start having strong feelings...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by tawsonfield‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to not confuse readers with simultaneous events?

In an omniscient third person, I have 8 (practically unrelated) events going simultaneously in different parts of a large mansion. I want to present these events as they happen, but I feel jumping ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Weckar E.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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From reactive to proactive; When should the protagonist change tack?

In my exploration of story structure, I have encountered some conflicting advice. In some instances, it has been suggested that the midpoint of a story represents the moment that the protagonist s...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Arkenstein XII‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is 7000 words too long for a chapter? [closed]

I've been working on a story for the last 4 years. It's just a personal project now and I've gone really in depth to clean up any plot holes I can readily see (thanks Cinemasins). I think I love th...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Emily‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Book on (character) voice

Any book recommendations that teach you how to make sure each character sounds different in dialogue and is recognizable even without dialogue tags? Any book tips to learn more about character deve...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Abidabiwriti‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When to publish satire of current events?

I'm writing a satirical novella of sorts, based on the current American political climate. I'm exploring themes of race, political polarity, and youth. I do want to finish and possibly publish th...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I write a romance that doesn't look obvious

I'm writing a story, it's not focused on romance, but that's an important part as well. The point is that I have two characters and I ended up ("accidentally") seeing chemistry between them, they h...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Ana Clara Moreira‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is a self expression article called?

I've been blogging for a while and I only write my thoughts and opinions on topics such as world peace, social matters, art & culture, and various other topics. I want to make a living writing ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Yostina‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Ambiguous sentences: How to tell when they need fixing?

A story of mine has the following sentence: Alyssa was possessed by a sudden, fierce urge to snatch the teacup out of her sister's hand and dump the contents into her perfectly arranged hai...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Evil Sparrow‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using ”as” after dialogue tags

Should a comma be used after a dialogue tag and before the word ”as”. For example: ”I don’t like this at all, ” he said, as the door closed behind them. Or ”I don’t like this at all, ” he s...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Vh123‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's a moment that's more impactful on a reread called?

I've met a few of these but the most recent instance was two characters discussing buying a third character a drink when they all got home, on the first reading this is a simple moment of comradery...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Referring to different instances of the same character in time travel

I am writing a story that involves time travel, and I have a chapter where a character from the future interacts with his present-day self. This chapter is written from the present-day self's POV. ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Tempo Mental‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to deal with moral/legal subjects in writing?

More specifically, how can one write a novel that examines or even argues against cultural moral values and laws without... dealing with legal fallout as the author? I realize this may be asking t...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Weckar E.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Which masthead editor to address a cover letter to for a short fiction submission?

Most advice says to include the editor's name in the cover letter. In researching mastheads, however, I find: Executive Editor, Managing editor, Regional Editors, Senior Editors, etc. (of course if...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by romebot‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to build up towards a "Moment of Reckoning" when my story is told in the first person?

I had started writing my novel in the first person. Later on, I planned some plot twists along the way. For these plot twists to happen, the protagonist shouldn't be aware of the consequences/int...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by tawsonfield‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's it called when the bad guy gets eaten?

Is there a specific name for the plot device in which the story's "Big Bad" has a cunning plan to use some monstrous being to further their diabolical machinations. This may be something summoned f...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I apply Hemingway's dialogue techniques to my own writing?

I open Hemingway's The Sun Also Rises at random (chapter 9). 'I haven't seen you since I've been back,' Brett said. 'No.' 'How are you, Jake?' 'Fine.' Brett looked at me. 'I say,' she s...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why is it that when I get to the end of writing my book, I get discombobulated and want to give up? [closed]

I've noticed this about most of the books I write, except for my short stories/novellas. When I get close to writing the end, my thoughts become a chaotic mess, and I don't know how to properly for...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Dawn Kelli‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Sense of humor in your sci-fi stories [closed]

What kind of humor do you find appropriate for your sci-fi stories? I realize that the question might seem so broad, but I think the target group for most sci-fi stories has a sense of humor that ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Javor‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it bad to suddenly introduce another element to your fantasy world a good ways into the story?

I'm writing a novel with many POVs, and this is a very flexible story. It started out with a few POVs who had one plot, and now there is a lot more, having been integrated in between those previous...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by A. Kvåle‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Any Tips On Writing Extended Recollection In A Novel

So, I've been working for about a month now on my latest novel but have come across some issues in regards to recollections of past events. I'll outline what I mean, because that's a bit general.....

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by B. Guilford‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does it make sense to (partially) create a conlang that you don't intend to actually use in the story?

The story that I'm currently working on is in a very far future. Clearly, people will speak a different language then. Now, I wondered if it can make sense to (partially) create a conlang for the ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by celtschk‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What tense to use for events that are still happening?

The question is similar to this but the answers does not answer me. In my general fiction novel, which is told in first person singular past tense, I encounter moments where I am confused whether t...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to cite a statistic from a website using APA?

Most of my life I've used the MLA citation format when writing any sort of essays or research papers about difference topics. However recently I've been exploring different types of citation format...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Ski Mask‭  ·  last activity 3mo ago by Mithical‭

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Can I use spoken English at some places over 'technically accurate English' in a general fiction?

I have written my novel as a 'first person singular' and in past tense. There are lot of times in it where I have written it as I will say it while speaking. I have used phrases which have implied ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Will writing actual numbers instead of writing them with letters affect readership?

This question sounds similar to this but I am asking something different. It is said that Stephen Hawking removed all the formulas except one because with each use of a formula the readers of boo...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to describe POV characters?

I want to describe my first person perspective character who's narrating without doing the Wattpad "mirror scene." How would I go about this?

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by thelonelywriter‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are some genuine sites for content writing? [closed]

What are some good genuine sites on the web for paid freelance content writing, proof-reading etc.? Even though I do not have any degree in journalism (full-time or part-time), I believe I have a f...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by srini‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I tell the reader that my character is autistic in Fantasy?

I am a woman with aspergers and writing an autistic character has always been close to my heart. Fiera Allas, a fantasy powerhouse with immense power and sword skills has always struck me as autist...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by thelonelywriter‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the art of designing names?

If you read names from popular novels you feel like the names define characters. They fit perfectly to the personality of character. For an e.g. Harry Potter, Robert Langdon, Jason Bourne, etc. I ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is using a different voice for protagonist's narration and dialogue ok?

My protagonist uses a lot of extensive vocabulary and is quite verbose. The novel I am writing is a first-person narrative, and my protagonist is the narrator of the novel. An extensive vocabulary...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Abhishek Dey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to positively portray high and mighty characters?

What I mean by "high and mighty" (though I realise this term does not exactly paint anyone in a nice light) are characters who know their worth and know themselves to be better than numerous other ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by FMB‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is starting In Media Res compatible with a Three-Act Structure?

I have a story in mind which I am confident will fit a three-act structure very well. However, I am uncertain about the exposition that I have been writing, as it feels a bit stifled, almost as tho...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Arkenstein XII‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why do authors use variations on a character's name within a single story?

I am having trouble understanding why authors use multiple version of a character's name in the same story. I feel it can make it harder to follow the story. Why do writers sometimes write the sam...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Renae Richards‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Authorship when author leaves the organization that published the article?

A friend wrote an article. She was an employee of a medium-sized national non-profit organization (in the US). The article was published and was sold at a very affordable cost by the organization...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by aparente001‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In an academic paper, who should be listed as the author of a community-authored document?

I'm currently writing my bachelor thesis, which will involve citing the Angular docs. Angular is a web framework developed by both community developers and employees of Google LLC (Google is the pr...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by PixelMaster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭