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Is it a good idea to thwart everything?

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When can I go from thwarting, to destroying?

For example, say the protagonist was working towards a goal, but towards the end they killed the people they had spent the novel with, as they became so obsessed with the desire and didn't want to be stopped. The threat was not destroyed, their friends were dead, and they were left to well, be insane.

Would doing something like that be way beyond thwarting the readers hopes, and destroying their enjoyment of the novel? Its pretty obvious that the protagonist would reach their goal from the start, so, I was thinking about destroying it. Is going to that point too far, or would it be more sensible to let them have their goal, but at a price?

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Depends.

  • Do you want a happy ending, or a downer?
  • Do you want to explore the idea that "winning" or "achieving the goal" can come at too high a price?
  • Will your protagonist realize that it doesn't profit if s/he gains the whole world, and loses his/her soul? Or will s/he stand cackling amid the ashes clutching the prize regardless?
  • Does your protagonist become evil in the end (another antagonist) and wind up getting taken out by another character?
  • How the reader supposed to feel about the protagonist's pyrrhic victory?
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