Posts by Frogson
What do you want? Do you want readers to think that they are in some kind of alternative fantasy ancient Egypt? Then call those clothes "haram" and "usekh". Do you want readers to think that they...
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This should be a comment Learn about the difference between telling and interiority.
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Why do you ask us? We haven't read your story. Ask your readers. The whole point of beta readers is that you can ask them why they stopped reading or what made them stop. If they just tell you tha...
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