Posts by Ælis
I think that you already know you have to cut it. I know you are emotionaly attached to it but, if it doesn't move the plot forward and if it doesn't help establish character,... well, as you said,...
As long as you find your character sympathetic, I think you are fine. However, here are some basic advice to advice build a sympathetic character: Make him suffer. We don't like to see someone i...
