Posts by Ælis
As long as you find your character sympathetic, I think you are fine. However, here are some basic advice to advice build a sympathetic character: Make him suffer. We don't like to see someone i...
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I think that you already know you have to cut it. I know you are emotionaly attached to it but, if it doesn't move the plot forward and if it doesn't help establish character,... well, as you said,...
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