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How can I smooth the transitions in this text? I feel like the POVs are changed quite a lot which makes it fairly confusing for readers to understand. To elucidate your points, please feel free t...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by pard‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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