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Q&A In-text citations for a source with no page numbers

The answer is two fold: Ask your teacher. Google it. I can't ask your teacher for you, but I did a quick Google search. Since you added the mla tag, I assume that's the format required. So he...

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Q&A Can I self-publish a book on the Kindle store when I'm under 18?

Amazon allows your parent to publish your book for you 4.1 Eligibility. You must have an active Program account in order to participate in the Program. You represent that you are at least 18 ...

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Q&A How to add individual citations or copyrights to an eBook?

I would add a paragraph for each story under the story title, then separated from the story by a line or something like that. Like how many cookbooks do it. Sometimes they explain about the recip...

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Q&A At what point does an interesting analogy become a distraction?

Your question is a bit all over the map but, ultimately, it's about tone. Your silly example would be fine for a first person narrator who loves puns and can never be completely serious. If it's ...

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Q&A How to creep the reader out with what seems like a normal person?

Something is very off about this being, and everyone knows it. Except it's not. When someone is very off, people steer clear. The creepy guy who hangs out in front of the supermarket makes h...

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Q&A Comics marketing: focus on issues or collections?

Situation: 5 year comic book series (by my spouse; I do marketing, website, etc) 4 issues a year (in theory...it's been slower) Issues are available as e-comic only Every 4 issues is collected in...

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Q&A Opening chapter foreshadowing or not?

Victim and suspect are both unknown and unrelated to my protagonist. It's because of this that the answer is maybe. Sometimes a prologue (not Chapter 1) with unrelated characters helps set th...

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Q&A As an author, how can you ensure that your agent/publisher isn’t ripping you off by pocketing your money and giving you false info about sales?

How can you be sure your employer is telling the truth when she says there's no money for bonuses this year? Or your local farmer's market farmer who says the early rain messed with the harvest an...

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Q&A Can I include diagrams in essays for complex topics?

Graphics and artwork get a bad rap in essays and similar length nonfiction because so many authors and editors make stupid decisions. How many stock photos of beautiful young people in posed actio...

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Q&A How do I record information when planning to write a recap of events?

Use an outline or old updates as a template Basically, you're taking minutes. What happened, who did it, and the rough order it happened in (with some grouping by category). Taking minutes from ...

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Q&A How is simplicity better than precision and clarity in prose?

Write for your audience. There are certainly many audiences who might not have the literacy level (or education) to do well or want books written at a upper secondary school level or higher educat...

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Q&A Elongated vowel sounds

Your example doesn't look ugly, it's just something that ought to be saved for dialogue. I wouldn't use it in non-fiction, for example. Another method is to italicize the word. This example i...

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Q&A The difference between dialogue marks

There are two other common options. Italics. Murder, she said. And nothing at all. Murder, she said. Or more likely set up as narration. She said murder. I prefer anything to the...

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Q&A Beyond letters and diaries—exercises to explore characters' personalities and motivation

Do any of them have a confessor? The most literal interpretation of this is that they're Catholic and confessing to an actual Priest who is sworn to secrecy. I don't know what real life Catholics...

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Q&A A poker game description that does not feel gimmicky

What you describe in the question sounds perfectly fine to me. So if other people are telling you (or you're telling yourself) that it's not quite right, the problem isn't what you're doing, it's ...

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Q&A How do I create uniquely male characters?

I think what's tripping you up is the idea that your male characters need to be characters that could not possibly be female. This probably comes from traditions of valuing what men do and devalui...

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Q&A Is it important to consider tone, melody, and musical form while writing a song?

There are multiple ways to write a song. Sometimes a composer will pick up already written lyrics. Sometimes a lyricist will work off of an already written melody and arrangement (less common for...

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Q&A Including letters and other documents in a memoir

Use an appendix The appendix is the perfect spot for longer documents you wish to include within a work (not just for a memoir). You can have as many as you want. Name each appendix. Appendix A...

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Q&A How is the monetary value of a single submission determined?

The publisher decides everything. If there is payment. What money is available for payment. How that money is divided up. If the money is per unit, what the units are and how to count them. If th...

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Q&A How to identify target audience? And how much details do I need to know about my perfect reader?

The example you give in your question is all about age and gender. And age is the one category you need to be mindful of while you write. Most people know in advance the age group they are writin...

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Q&A Are submission services worth pursuing?

The Writer's Market books will give you the lists of agents (with what they're looking for, contact info, etc) and articles (also in their Writer's Digest magazines and websites) on how to write th...

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Q&A How to show that a character cares for another, but is also clumsy?

Let it be awkward. I see you already got this advice, and there's a reason for it. People in general go through machinations of all sorts just to keep things from "being awkward" between them and...

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Q&A Shortening a title without changing its meaning

It's fine to shorten but only when the reader can fill in the blank. So far, you have: Managing a lot of people is a very difficult problem to Lot of people, difficult problem In this exam...

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Q&A I want to traditionally publish my work but I have multiple ISBNs what do I do?

Do nothing. When you create a contract with a traditional publisher, they will tell you what to do. Almost certainly they'll want to use their own ISBNs. As for the ISBN itself, it's done with. ...

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Q&A Sending manuscript to multiple publishers

Most publishers are fine with simultaneous submissions and understand that it could otherwise take years for a manuscript to be accepted. What's important is to read the publisher's guidelines bef...

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