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Posts by F1Krazy‭

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Q&A How do I write transitions between thinking and speaking?

I've just downloaded an open-source script-writing program, and have started converting the scripts for an anime I've been writing into industry-standard formatting. There are a few points in the ...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 2mo ago by Mithical‭

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Q&A What is a good way to name characters?

Here's a list of various techniques I use when it comes to naming characters: The lazy approach Pick the first good name that comes into your head. Simple. I do this for a lot of minor or one-sho...

posted 7y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Would publishing my story like a TV series be successful?

The publishing model you're suggesting isn't actually all that new. Serialised novels - novels published in newspapers or magazines, one chapter at a time - were very common back in the 19th cent...

posted 4y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is a sequel allowed to start before the end of the first book?

A "sequel" that takes place during the events of its predecessor is called a midquel (or more precisely, an "intraquel"). In your case, only the first 25% of your second book is intraquel, but the ...

posted 5y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Can I use prominent people in history to as characters in my fiction?

Sure you can! People do it all the time. To use your own example of Abraham Lincoln, there was a film from a few years ago (adapted from some other medium) depicting him as a part-time vampire hun...

posted 7y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is it okay to have a character that has the same first or last name as another famous character

The problem you're describing actually has an associated TV Trope: the One Mario Limit (obligatory warning, now that I've added a link). Some names become so strongly associated with one character/...

posted 7y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to keep it interesting before the inciting incident?

I'm going to use the example of one of my all-time favourite anime, Steins;Gate, which also has two inciting incidents. The first is Okabe accidentally inventing the time machine and shifting hims...

posted 6y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to deceive the MC

In a third-person limited (or first-person) narrative, deceiving the MC and deceiving the reader are pretty much the same thing, since the reader only knows as much as the protagonist. In this case...

posted 5y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Using footnotes in fiction: children's book which can be enjoyed by adults

When I was a kid, I had the Walking With Dinosaurs and Walking With Beasts companion books, and I read them over and over. I didn't know a lot of the more technical terms, but I could either look t...

posted 4y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Intentionally misspelling words in dialogue

If you want to place particular emphasis on a word in a piece of dialogue, you can use italics: "Looking and looking... in all the wrong places." There is also a convention - though admittedl...

posted 4y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is a new paragraph line needed in dialogue when a character responds with actions?

I see nothing wrong with this, provided the dialogue and the responding action flow together neatly. Your example is a bit stilted, but if you connect them like so: "Move!" he barked, and I imm...

posted 4y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What is the effect on the young reader when there is no "Happy Ending" in a story for children?

Three words: Bridge to Terabithia. Every single time I have heard someone mention this book (or the film based on it), it's been in the context of how much they were traumatised by its ending as a ...

posted 6y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Bad to start story with VR/non-real scene?

There's nothing wrong with starting your story with a fantasy VR sequence. This is known as a Fake-Out Opening (TV Tropes link warning!). What you want to avoid - and what you do seem to be concer...

posted 4y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Reusing story title as chapter title

As the other answers have stated, I don't believe re-using the story's name for the first chapter is a particularly good idea, especially if it means something different later on in your story. How...

posted 4y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to tell readers that I know my story is factually incorrect?

I've read a few books that had an "afterword" section at the end, where the author would address the reader directly to talk about the work. I know Anthony Horowitz did this with the Alex Rider ser...

posted 5y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to turn a single narrative into a branching one?

You have your main path already, which is a good start. What I would do from there is identify the main choices that the protagonist makes - the things they say or do that drive the plot in that sp...

posted 5y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I represent two computers having a conversation between themselves that other characters are unaware of?

I'd say that whether you need a voiceover reading out the messages or not depends on how long the conversation goes on for. In the example you gave - Sherlock - the text conversations rarely last...

posted 7y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Approach to pop culture quotes in fiction writing

According to this question, you'd be in trouble if you quoted entire songs, but single lines should be okay. Making the quotes approximate would ensure you don't run into any legal issues, but woul...

posted 5y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is this easter egg too obvious?

"Obvious" is subjective. A couple of weeks ago at work, one of my coworkers wrote part of the chorus to "Smells Like Teen Spirit" on one of our whiteboards. Another of my coworkers - who's about my...

posted 5y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Making a prolonged training montage work

I had this same problem while writing my ongoing superhero story. It starts with the obligatory origin arc: the protagonist gains his powers, is taken in by the government agency that regulates sup...

posted 6y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Do readers not like a book if it's too dark and the characters almost never win?

The specific problem you're trying to avoid is called "Darkness-Induced Audience Apathy". If you feel like destroying your productivity for the next week, you can look it up on TV Tropes. People ca...

posted 6y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to invest readers in a story that (initially) has no clear direction?

What I would personally do in this situation is a "How We Got Here" scenario. Start off towards the climax of your story, with the protagonist facing down (or preparing to face down) whatever the ...

posted 6y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do you write a Stack Exchange answer?

"Ask a stupid question, get a stupid answer" does not apply on Stack Exchange. On multiple occasions, I've seen people post "answers" that are either sarcasm/jokes, personal attacks, or just plain...

posted 4y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is there any way to get around having everyone in the world speak the same language?

You can work around the language barrier the same way we do in real life: have someone act as a translator. There are three ways of introducing such a character: Option 1: The moment the need for...

posted 6y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Chessmaster type characters?

To add to Mikailo's excellent answer, another character you should definitely look at is Sora from No Game No Life: he has both the chessmaster intellect and the foolish, goofy personality. In part...

posted 7y ago by F1Krazy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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