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Posts by April Salutes Monica C.‭

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Q&A Poetry when unstructured?

Like most kids, I went through the All Poetry Must Rhyme phase. Then a little later in school, rhyme was less essential (especially in English, a less rhyme-compatible language than many other ...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Including disabled characters without "inspiration porn"

Is this character the only blind one around? Did she go to a mentor to learn how to navigate efficiently? Is there a school for the blind? How old was she when she lost her vision? (I read a ...

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Q&A Avoiding the "not like other girls" trope?

Just be aware that almost everything is trope/stereotype of some sort: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/AlwaysFemale One of the best ways to mitigate that is to make sure there are MAN...

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Q&A How to write character's emotional reactions in a screenplay?

I would advise only adding the emotion if it's contrary to what may be expected. So Monster appears. BOB (scared) What's going on? Is less essential than: BOB's Mom appears, carrying a...

posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A News shot in screenwriting

I think you want an INSERT. From https://screenwriting.io/what-is-an-insert/ An insert is a shot — often a close-up — that focuses on a specific detail. If necessary, these shots can be writte...

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Q&A Are there tools that can aid an author in writing a branching storyline?

I want to add one more tool: Archivos. (No personal link, I just saw a demo from them and plan to check them out when I start writing more.) https://archivos.digital/about-archivos/ First,...

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Q&A What are the points to remember when the pet is the narrator and is narrating the story of its owner?

As usual, I have an example from Worm! In the Interlude for Arc 4 (main chapters are from the heroine's 1st-person POV, interludes each have a different character in tight-third), Rachel's dog Bru...

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Q&A How do I keep an essay about "feeling flat" from feeling flat?

I was invited to participate in an anthology of essays about a tv show. I chose an episode based on the Wikipedia summary (since it had been so long since I had watched it), but after I watched it...

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Q&A How much character growth crosses the line into breaking the character

(not a duplicate of Character Development - How much is too much? because that one is more about "overreaction" to smaller events.) TL;DR: How much can a character change without becoming unrecogn...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Can I turn my anal-retentiveness into a career?

One option that may work for you is Fiverr.com I have not personally used it yet, but I plan to both hire audio editors from it, and also offer my own services. There are articles about writing...

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Q&A In which countries do printed fantasy novels sell the most?

This is NOT a great or complete answer, just the start of one, as it's been unanswered for a bit. https://www.statista.com/statistics/288746/global-book-market-by-region/ and https://www.statista....

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Q&A How can I keep dialogue attached to character names in a Pages play script?

I could do this in Word very easily -- Short Version: Create a Style called "Character Name" Indicate that the style "Dialogue" is what follows next. (that's on the first area of the create-a-st...

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Q&A Using expletives in an essay

When I taught ENGL100, I advised students to minimize quotes (still maximize citations for their summaries and paraphrases unless it was to indicate "poetry or precision". The quote you indicated ...

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Q&A How can I make a non-linear timeline less confusing?

I think the best answer is to see what other authors have done, like many have suggested. I was listening to Worm, and in arc 11, Infestation, all 8 interludes (we realize) all take place simultan...

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Q&A What should be the ideal length of sentences in a blog post for ease of reading?

In general, writing for the web is expected to be shorter, with briefer sentences, paragraphs, and sections. I have found PlainLanguage.gov's guidelines extremely helpful. (I linked to the "be con...

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Q&A When should a starting writer get his own webpage?

At the very least, I would try to reserve the URL for your real name (or pen name), and any others that may be relevant - such as the book's name, if that's coming soon. Get a dot-com if it is ava...

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Q&A Should one use the legal "shall" in requirements documents and specification documents?

Although the ISO may favor keeping "shall," I agree with PlainLanguage for this one: https://plainlanguage.gov/guidelines/conversational/shall-and-must/ Use “must” not “shall” to impose require...

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Q&A The Good, the Bad, and the Semicolon

I think most people just FEAR the semicolon! Below is an excerpt from https://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon How to use a semicolon The most feared punctuation on earth. skipping over WHY...

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Q&A How to include external references when writing internal documentation?

I like Monica's answer -- my answer here is about how to be sure these links are still viable in the future. If others are also making the documents, I encourage "casual citation", so there's no...

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Q&A Does it really serve a main character to give them one driving want?

Maybe one way to think about it is like thinking about your resume & cover letter: you are a vastly more complex person than what can fit on a few pieces of paper, but you re-arrange the order...

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Q&A Is the website allpoetry.com benefecial for poets and writers?

This site doesn't seem to be explicitly listed as a vanity/scam on the Writer's Beware list here: https://www.sfwa.org/other-resources/for-authors/writer-beware/anthologies/ , but I was thinking of...

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Q&A How to traditionally publish a fantasy-fiction novel serial in our modern era of publishing without the use of zines?

I looked up Isekai on Wikipedia, and one paragraph grabbed me: Several later examples from English literature include the novel Alice's Adventures in Wonderland (1865), as well as A Connecticu...

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Q&A How to open a serious speech?

When I taught Presentations in Tech Writing, one of my biggest tools was "ROPES" - review/rapport, overview/objective, present, exercise, summary. In more social settings, you're using the comedy...

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Q&A Which are the fastest-paying literary magazines?

This link at All Freelance Writers - Markets lists not only markets, but (when possible) their turnaround time on pay. https://allfreelancewriting.com/writers-markets/ With the "Fiction" limiter ...

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Q&A Terminology in sociology & statistics

This is really @Amadeus's answer (so I'll delete this if s/he posts under his/her own account), but I didn't want it to be lost in a comment: I'd call it a "proxy", often computed or logically ...

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