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Yes, if you have two POV narrators in the same section, you must at least put her POV in another paragraph. Think of it as similar to speech; if you'd put a new speaker on a new line or in a new pa...
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Yes, if you have two POV narrators in the same section, you must at _least_ put her POV in another paragraph. Think of it as similar to speech; if you'd put a new speaker on a new line or in a new paragraph, you must do the same with POV. These are her thoughts. You have to differentiate them.
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