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I am currently writing a FICTION-FANTASY-HORROR novel, and I have only written some pages. I have published the first part of the novel especially for this question. How can I make my first lines ...
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System
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2019-12-08T03:32:11Z (almost 5 years ago)
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2019-12-08T03:32:11Z (almost 5 years ago)
I am currently writing a `FICTION-FANTASY-HORROR` novel, and I have only written some pages. I have published the first part of the novel especially for _this_ question. How can I make my first lines attractive, suspenseful, hooking...? You can read what I have written by [clicking here](http://vivastemcell.com/enigma.htm). I would **LOVE** to hear your **suggestions**. Any help is greatfully appreciated. - Update2: Site link fixed.
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System
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2014-05-25T07:10:09Z (over 10 years ago)
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