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Of all the people who wanted to join the trip, Paola was the the last I expected would come. It surprised me. We barely knew each other at school, and I was pretty sure she wasn't interested in ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:41:02Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T03:41:02Z (over 4 years ago)
> Of all the people who wanted to join the trip, Paola was the the last I expected would come. It surprised me. We barely knew each other at school, and I was pretty sure she wasn't interested in me. I didn't pride myself on being a ladies' man. But if all my rejections had taught me anything, it was this: if a girl never looks at you, it probably means "not a chance." > > I turned to check on her. She was ambling among the rocks, her back to me, almost a dot in the distance. Despite that, I could still make out her figure: her sharp shoulder blades, her bony arms, her childlike yet feminine hips. Frail but charming features. What I liked the most, though, was her long blonde hair. It contrasted beautifully with her bronze skin. Like Spring and Fall, fire and wood. Light and darkness. > > With a sigh, I resumed my way down the beach... Another concern I have is that it takes a while after the setting is explicitly stated (the beach). Maybe _trip_ and _rocks_ are enough for the meanwhile?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2014-08-12T08:43:18Z (over 9 years ago)
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