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I just finished a new release. I encountered a passage in the book that doesn't quite make sense. Just a single sentence that is out of place. Grammatically it is fine, but in context it doesn't s...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:44:19Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/12806 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Lyndon White
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2019-12-08T03:44:19Z (over 4 years ago)
I just finished a new release. I encountered a passage in the book that doesn't quite make sense. Just a single sentence that is out of place. Grammatically it is fine, but in context it doesn't seem like it fits there. I believe it may be a left-over from when a draft was being revised. The extra detail would have fit in to a slightly different piece of plot than is in the book. It feels like it is a left-over reference to that plot point that was not edited out, when the rest was replaced. **Can I/Should I contact the author/publisher and ask if that section is meant to be there?** Perhaps I should post on their forum and ask about it. If this was software I would file a bug report. Fiction books don't have bug reports. Though I have seen them for nonfiction.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2014-09-07T12:27:11Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 15