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This is a bit complicated to explain. Here's an example: She had green eyes and extremely curly hair. It looked like a cluster of ferns in a mountain forest. OK, that was an awful metaphor,...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:45:38Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T03:45:38Z (almost 5 years ago)
This is a bit complicated to explain. Here's an example: > She had green eyes and extremely curly hair. It looked like a cluster of ferns in a mountain forest. OK, that was an awful metaphor, but you get the idea. Is it OK as long as the next sentence is clear about which item is referring to? Or should I write something like this instead? > She had green eyes and extremely curly hair. The hair looked like a cluster of ferns in a mountain forest.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2014-09-13T14:48:00Z (about 10 years ago)
Original score: 4