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Some examples: Half-crouching, I went over to the railing and pointed my flashlight down (to the ground). It was approximately a two-storey fall. Not incredibly high, but high enough to kil...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:47:17Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/12994 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T03:47:17Z (almost 5 years ago)
Some examples: > Half-crouching, I went over to the railing and pointed my flashlight down **(to the ground).** It was approximately a two-storey fall. Not incredibly high, but high enough to kill a person. > > * * * > > Cath covered her nose **(with her hand).** “Damn. That stinks." Is the **bold** text necessary? When to be specific and when to let context fill in the holes (e.g. the surrounding sentences)?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2014-09-30T02:23:50Z (about 10 years ago)
Original score: 4