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My thought is, if you can remove the text (which you've bolded) and it still makes sense — that is, if there is no other reasonable interpretation — you can take it out. Can Cath reasonably cover ...
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2019-12-13T12:00:25Z (almost 5 years ago)
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2019-12-08T03:47:18Z (almost 5 years ago)
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My thought is, if you can remove the text (which you've bolded) and it still makes sense — that is, if there is no other reasonable interpretation — you can take it out. Can Cath reasonably cover her nose with her knee? with a bandana? If not, you're fine.
#1: Imported from external source
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2014-09-30T09:50:55Z (about 10 years ago)
Original score: 6