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Describe what she's seeing which makes her perceive Terrence's emotions. Lana looked over at Terrence, who had deliberately put himself into John's shadow. Emotions flickered over Terrence's fa...
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2019-12-13T12:00:26Z (about 5 years ago)
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2019-12-08T03:52:29Z (about 5 years ago)
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Describe what she's seeing which makes her perceive Terrence's emotions. > Lana looked over at Terrence, who had deliberately put himself into John's shadow. Emotions flickered over Terrence's face like a cascade of sparks. He couldn't quite look at John, but kept stealing glances upward. He bit his lower lip and ducked his head, flinching as John swung his arm to punctuate some point. Terrence hunched his head, his mouth twitching, and worry lines rippled across his forehead. Lana realized he felt _guilty_ for what he'd done.
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2014-11-12T18:03:17Z (about 10 years ago)
Original score: 5