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Sometimes, when I write my stories, I may include a very long sentence but it can be desrcibe eith a short sentence. i.e: What I write: " When I went into the room of darkness, the light that surr...
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System
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2019-12-08T03:52:58Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Simon-Nail-It
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2019-12-08T03:52:58Z (over 4 years ago)
Sometimes, when I write my stories, I may include a very long sentence but it can be desrcibe eith a short sentence. i.e: What I write: " When I went into the room of darkness, the light that surrounded fade away in lighting speed. I laid down like a falling feather into my comfy place, and opened the door of dreams." What it mean: "I was going to sleep." Is it ok to write like this? Because some of friends think it's boring and some of them can't understand it.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2014-11-19T10:59:29Z (over 9 years ago)
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