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Q&A How to convey breeding through character dialogue

I'm trying to write a story based in medieval times. Some of my characters are kings and nobles so I'm trying to make their conversations more... "regal"... or "elegant". But I'm unable to create ...

0 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by user96551‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T03:53:32Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar user96551‭ · 2019-12-08T03:53:32Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm trying to write a story based in medieval times.

Some of my characters are kings and nobles so I'm trying to make their conversations more... "regal"... or "elegant". But I'm unable to create authentic dialogue, as it's so far from how I usually speak.

What I mean by regal: instead of saying "That's rubbish!" they'd say "Such tripe!" or use words like banal or trite. They'd use sentences like "bred to fight and conquer" or similar, and convey a finer, upper class breeding.

Are there any reference resources to do this better? Or perhaps any pointers from anyone who has been through the same process?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2014-11-26T03:06:18Z (about 10 years ago)
Original score: 5