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I want to write: Our higher-profile projects include the delivery and erection of large exhibition stands for --company name-- at --redacted-- Championship; The emphasis is only to highlight ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:53:51Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/14532 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Dom
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2019-12-08T03:53:51Z (over 4 years ago)
I want to write: > Our higher-profile projects include the delivery and _erection_ of large exhibition stands for --company name-- at --redacted-- Championship; <sup>The emphasis is only to highlight the problem word here and is not present in the actual copy.</sup> I can't help worrying that erection introduces something unnecessary. I could replace it with "delivering and assembling" instead, but erection is technically correct and a more precise word. I need an outside opinion on whether erection introduces any possible effect, even a momentary confusion or lapse of focus, that I wouldn't want for formal commercial copy? Sorry if this is a silly question or off topic.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2014-11-29T15:50:53Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 1