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So the protagonist's boyfriend committed suicide. He left a suicide note. And now the detective is showing it to the protagonist: "So I'm the one who made him do it? "We read the letter. (...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:53:56Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/14544 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T03:53:56Z (almost 5 years ago)
So the protagonist's boyfriend committed suicide. He left a suicide note. And now the detective is showing it to the protagonist: > "So _I'm_ the one who made him do it? > > "We read the letter. (Apologies. Standard procedures). Nothing inside suggests that. In fact, Tom didn't leave a reason." How can I restructure the dialogue so I doesn't use the parentheses?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2014-12-01T15:11:39Z (almost 10 years ago)
Original score: 2