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Add a little stage direction. "We read the letter." She had the grace to look a little shamefaced. "Apologies. Standard procedure." He nodded, even if his heart hurt a little to think the cops ...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-13T12:00:26Z (about 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T03:53:57Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
Add a little stage direction. > "We read the letter." She had the grace to look a little shamefaced. "Apologies. Standard procedure." He nodded, even if his heart hurt a little to think the cops had read Tom's note. "Nothing inside suggests you're to blame. In fact, Tom didn't leave a reason."
#1: Imported from external source
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2014-12-01T15:31:52Z (about 10 years ago)
Original score: 8