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I think all your original examples sound fine. Go with your inner ear and let your beta/editor add or remove commas for the sake of grammar. As Bobn points out, the commas indicate pauses, and all ...
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2019-12-13T12:00:26Z (about 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T03:54:15Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
I think all your original examples sound fine. Go with your inner ear and let your beta/editor add or remove commas for the sake of grammar. As Bobn points out, the commas indicate pauses, and all those pauses sound natural and appropriate.
#1: Imported from external source
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2014-12-03T19:12:20Z (about 10 years ago)
Original score: 3