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Q&A What are ways to "Show, don't tell" without simply listing bodily actions?

Tell: Andy looked angry Show: Andy scrunched his eyebrows together, he gritted his teeth and glared. His skin turned a bright red making him look like a raging demon. Are there other ...

3 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by user8727‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T03:58:47Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/15929
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar user8727‭ · 2019-12-08T03:58:47Z (almost 5 years ago)
 **Tell:**

> Andy looked angry

**Show:**

> Andy scrunched his eyebrows together, he gritted his teeth and glared. His skin turned a bright red making him look like a raging demon.

Are there other ways to 'Show' other than to list bodily actions?  
Or without using the word 'Like'?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2015-01-18T23:03:55Z (almost 10 years ago)
Original score: 7