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Q&A What does being "heavy handed" mean? And how does one avoid it?

Heavy-handed means you force your plot, your characters, your prose, your dialog, and any other aspect of your writing, to fit a preconceived concept, regardless of how well or naturally it integra...

posted 9y ago by Chris Sunami‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T04:01:07Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Chris Sunami‭ · 2019-12-08T04:01:07Z (over 4 years ago)
_Heavy-handed_ means you force your plot, your characters, your prose, your dialog, and any other aspect of your writing, to fit a preconceived concept, regardless of how well or naturally it integrates with the writing. In other words, you write with no subtlety or realism. It's a subjective judgment, so it is hard to provide examples, but here's an exaggerated one I just made up:

> Sheila smiled. She had vanquished the evil, greedy, squirrel-kicking lawyer, and it felt so good.

We get it, the lawyer is a bad guy --the writing doesn't need to be so _heavy handed_.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2015-02-02T17:31:43Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 15