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When is OK to omitting pronouns and possessive adjectives in fiction? Examples: She called me that weekend while I was cleaning my apartment. She called me that weekend while cleaning my a...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T04:02:01Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T04:02:01Z (about 5 years ago)
When is OK to omitting pronouns and possessive adjectives in fiction? Examples: > She called me that weekend **while I was cleaning** my apartment. > > She called me that weekend **while cleaning** my apartment. > > * * * > > **Once on my bed,** I took the box and opened it. > > **Once on bed,** I took the box and opened it. > > * * * > > **He explained to me** that a friend **of his**. > > **He explained** that a friend.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-02-07T02:41:04Z (almost 10 years ago)
Original score: 2