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Q&A Skipping the action scene

My novel has a lot of fighting scenes. It's natural since its about a war. The problem is that people don't read books for fighting scenes. Numerous fighting scenes is just bad writing. J.R.R. Tol...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by user8727‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Question style scene combat
#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T04:04:24Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/16331
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar user8727‭ · 2019-12-08T04:04:24Z (almost 5 years ago)
My novel has a lot of fighting scenes. It's natural since its about a war. The problem is that people don't read books for fighting scenes. Numerous fighting scenes is just bad writing. J.R.R. Tolkien decided to knock Bilbo Baggins unconscious rather than to write a single one (although I did read the abridged version of _The Hobbit_.)

What is a good way to skip over the action scenes? I don't plan to write too many of them.

What I have right now is basically this: The monsters attacked Maeken. He slew the primitive beasts with the several tricks up his sleeve that he had learned over the years. Blah blah backstory. Maeken beheaded the final monster and surveyed the field of corpses.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2015-02-25T17:59:52Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 0