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My story is of a fantasy world where the wars of several species have all been fought, lost, and the protagonist is writing his journal from inside a jail cell. The writing he does can't be erased....
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T04:04:31Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/16332 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Dawe Sinlow
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2019-12-08T04:04:31Z (about 5 years ago)
My story is of a fantasy world where the wars of several species have all been fought, lost, and the protagonist is writing his journal from inside a jail cell. The writing he does can't be erased. I want to keep all his thoughts in. Would it be too much if I kept part of the writing in the journal, but just have it crossed out? What I want to do is keep the mistakes in his writing crossed out but legible so readers can read his real thoughts/things he edits out of his journal. Would this be too much? Would people understand what I'm doing?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-02-25T20:12:41Z (almost 10 years ago)
Original score: 2