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A different bullet to consider biting: Remove all of the headings. That gives the conclusion equal standing with the other parts. Now all that's left (hah!) is to mark the transitions.
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T04:06:23Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/16560 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Dale Hartley Emery
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2019-12-08T04:06:23Z (almost 5 years ago)
A different bullet to consider biting: Remove _all_ of the headings. That gives the conclusion equal standing with the other parts. Now all that's left (hah!) is to mark the transitions.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-03-19T19:51:51Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 1