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I like the third version, without colons, because the visual break and the code formatting makes it clear that this is a new "clause," or thought, and the piece of code is not a grammatically corre...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-13T12:00:28Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T04:06:38Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
I like the third version, without colons, because the visual break and the code formatting makes it clear that this is a new "clause," or thought, and the piece of code is not a grammatically correct full sentence. Since you are continuing one sentence over several breaks, I wouldn't use capitals. I think Watercleave has another good solution if you can't settle on any combination of punctuation and capitalization.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-03-17T23:10:28Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 1