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Q&A Which one is the correct dialogue punctuation format?

I am writing my first novel and this the very first confusion I would like to clarify. As I am not a native English speaker, I find it very hard to understand the punctuation scheme in direct speec...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by Lara‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Lara‭ · 2019-12-08T04:07:15Z (almost 5 years ago)
I am writing my first novel and this the very first confusion I would like to clarify. As I am not a native English speaker, I find it very hard to understand the punctuation scheme in direct speeches.

Which one of the following is correct? Please explain why the other one is wrong.

> “I did what I needed to do.” He lowered his head to look at my face.
> 
> “You should've waited for me,” she replied.

or

> “I did what I needed to do,” he lowered his head to look at my face.
> 
> “You should've waited for me,” she replied.

Also, how well does this punctuation rules apply for action tags like - `he shrugged`, `he smile`, `he scoffed` and similar tags.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2015-03-20T12:03:33Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 2