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I finally sat down and wrote the first chapter of my planned novel. Reading back through it, I realized that there is so much that happens in only 2000 words. People die, the protagonist is capture...
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exposition
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T04:07:32Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/16602 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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user3395203
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2019-12-08T04:07:32Z (almost 5 years ago)
I finally sat down and wrote the first chapter of my planned novel. Reading back through it, I realized that there is so much that happens in only 2000 words. People die, the protagonist is captured, dialogue happens, but it all happens so fast, one event after another. How do I write in a more expansive way?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-03-23T17:07:31Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 6