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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/16617
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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/16617
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/

If you have a full sentence as a parenthetical, you generally don't capitalize and punctuate it that way. So it normally appears:

> Dick and Jane watch Spot run (they know Spot likes to chase cars).

But when you have more than one sentence in the parenthetical, you have to indicate where each complete sentence stops and starts. To avoid the weird `.).` construction, I might write it thus:

> Dick and Jane watch Spot run (They know Spot likes to chase cars. He's never caught one, and wouldn't know what to do with one if he did, but he chases them. The cat, being more sensible, doesn't chase anything).

Although if you have that much of a thought in the parentheses, I would move the parenthetical _out_ of the original sentence altogether, and then capitalize and punctuate normally. You would continue with the rest of your prose afterward, and the parenthetical is just between two sentences.

> Dick and Jane watch Spot run **.** (They know Spot likes to chase cars. He's never caught one, and wouldn't know what to do with one if he did, but he chases them. The cat, being more sensible, doesn't chase anything**.)** Mom told Dad he had better buy Spot a leash, or be prepared to explain the concept of "roadkill" to Dick and Jane.

Original score: 6