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I wanted to have someone correct themselves mid-sentence, and I remembered some guides I read on the subject. They only seemed to allow only the most basic of stutters, but I want one where someon...
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System
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2019-12-08T04:09:58Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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user1316538
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2019-12-08T04:09:58Z (almost 5 years ago)
I wanted to have someone correct themselves mid-sentence, and I remembered some guides I read on the subject. They only seemed to allow only the most basic of stutters, but I want one where someone starts saying one word, then switches to another as they're saying it. > Feitla took a kneeling position. “Lord Kor—” > > “I’m warden now, don’t be so formal,” Korsin said. > > “Lo-umm-Warden..." Also, if I start a sentence like that, do all three words get capitals or just the first word that was cut-off?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-04-09T18:28:13Z (over 9 years ago)
Original score: 3