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Okay, I'm not sure if they are "rules" or "grammatical", but here they go: After a while our necks began to ache, so we sat on the rest chairs behind (us). I liked it here. The air was fresh ...
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System
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2019-12-08T04:12:58Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Alexandro Chen
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2019-12-08T04:12:58Z (about 5 years ago)
Okay, I'm not sure if they are "rules" or "grammatical", but here they go: > After a while our necks began to ache, so we sat on the rest chairs behind **(us)**. I liked it here. The air was fresh and there was a low hip roof to shelter us from the wind. > > To give myself something to do, I searched for constellations. I wasn't an expert **(on it)**; my knowledge was limited to horoscope columns and astronomy documentaries. As an author, would you omit the **bolded** parts? Why or why not?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-04-29T16:04:44Z (over 9 years ago)
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