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Using first person might work best for a situation like this. You'd be able to easily convey inner thoughts, use quotation marks for strictly dialog, and have the option to format intruding other "...
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2019-12-08T04:20:25Z (over 4 years ago)
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Using first person might work best for a situation like this. You'd be able to easily convey inner thoughts, use quotation marks for strictly dialog, and have the option to format intruding other "inner" voices differently... > As I approached the burnt-out shell of the stone building, I thought it looked like the fires of hell had consumed it. _You don't know what hell is like,_ a voice in my head thought. I shook my head to clear it. ...or as vague thoughts: > As I approached the burnt-out shell of the stone building, I thought it looked like the fires of hell had consumed it. As if I had any idea what hell was like! _Why did I think that?_ I wondered, confused. I shook my head to clear it.
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2015-06-09T05:05:04Z (almost 9 years ago)
Original score: 2