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Q&A Should I write the actual death scene?

I am writing a novel, and in one part, a boy falls off the building. I feel like it would be very gory. Most people said to write in great detail, but then some people say to write what I know. I f...

2 answers  ·  posted 8y ago by Capril Solaris‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T04:34:00Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/18726
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Capril Solaris‭ · 2019-12-08T04:34:00Z (over 4 years ago)
I am writing a novel, and in one part, a boy falls off the building. I feel like it would be very gory. Most people said to write in great detail, but then some people say to write what I know. I feel that if I write a gory scene it would turn out plain.

My question is, should I describe what happens to her when she falls to the bottom, or should I just leave it saying what went through her, and her friend's, mind? If you could, I would like some examples.

**Edit:** And should I let him die? He is a character close to the main character, but I feel it is unrealistic to write a story where _everything_ turns out perfectly fine

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2015-08-20T13:43:21Z (over 8 years ago)
Original score: 2