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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/18876
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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/18876
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/

In my current writing, I've been having some trouble with the plot, specifically with going from an outline detailing what I need, to an outline detailing how I get there. I think the problem (or at least part of it) might be that I don't have a clear chapter-by-chapter summary for the book. My problem is that I'm having trouble designing this chapter-by-chapter outline.

I'm working with the following structure:

1. Character has a motivation/goal. 
2. Character faces building conflicts in the way of that goal. 
3. Something big goes wrong for the character, inducing a possible cliffhanger. 
4. Chapter ends. 
5. Next chapter: Character reacts to big disaster. 
6. Character adjusts to deal with the problem. 
7. Character makes decision and takes action (or doesn't). 

My problem lies in step 1. In my very first chapter, my character is entirely passive. He is in fact part of a large crowd that is being evacuated. I cannot seem to find a goal he is actively striving for at this time.

_Note: I realize passive characters is not something readers greatly want, which is why I will also be scanning my outline for other instances of it, and fixing them. Regardless, there will be instances where the main character is passive._

**Question:** How can I determine the goal of a scene/chapter when the main character is entirely passive? Can I even do it? Do I _need_ to make him active somehow?

_Disclaimer: I realize that there is a certain level of disapproval on this site towards structures (from some people). Please keep in mind the question is not about the structure. It's about finding a goal for a passive character._

Original score: 3