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Q&A Should I put diagrams into a formal essay?

I have asked a question like this before in Workplace, but this time is only about diagrams specifically, and on formal work generally. Some answers in there say that I can use the Venn diagram if ...

1 answer  ·  posted 9y ago by Ooker‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T04:45:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
I have asked a question like this before [in Workplace](https://workplace.stackexchange.com/q/49388/26826), but this time is only about diagrams specifically, and on formal work generally. Some answers in there say that I can use the Venn diagram if I make it less childish (drawing by a program, not by hand).

I really like to increasing productivity and efficiency. In his book _The Back of The Napkin_, Dan Roam argues that to pictures is a power tool to solving problems and selling ideas. I have seen pictures used in solving problem works (e.g. research papers), but never seen them in formal selling idea works (e.g. cover letter, SOP). I want to know if adding them in any formal writing is good or not.

For example, when talking in a cover letter about how relevant the field I study and the skills the job require, I think using this Venn diagram is effective (imagine this is drawn by a program): ![image description](https://i.stack.imgur.com/mpBaE.png)

And now, in the personal statement I will use to apply to a grad school, when I talking about how I work smart, not work hard, it is best to illustrating the point with this: ![image description](https://i.stack.imgur.com/wjwjZ.png)

Let alone the space they require, what do you think?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2015-11-04T07:36:29Z (about 9 years ago)
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