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I am working on a fiction novel and have had difficulties with the passive voice. I feel that in this case the sentence is stronger when the passive voice is used. "Born in a land without jus...
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System
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2019-12-08T04:51:17Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Al Xavier
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2019-12-08T04:51:17Z (almost 5 years ago)
I am working on a fiction novel and have had difficulties with the passive voice. I feel that in this case the sentence is stronger when the passive voice is used. "Born in a land without justice, sodden with the blood and tears of earlier generations, he lived........"
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2015-12-13T13:11:00Z (almost 9 years ago)
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