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Try and include a bit of wit between the characters. Provide moments in your story whereby, there is a display of short and concise, witty one-liners. These are bounced between the characters li...
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System
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2019-12-08T04:54:39Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Zoshi
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2019-12-08T04:54:39Z (almost 5 years ago)
Try and include a bit of wit between the characters. Provide moments in your story whereby, there is a display of short and concise, witty one-liners. These are bounced between the characters like a tennis match, back-and-forth between the two. To think of it abstractly - imagine a point scoring system, if one provides a short, succinct and humorous line - they score a point, the other retaliates. This is all in good jest and provides for non-hostile competitiveness. This competitiveness is where the sexual tension is derived from.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-01-05T09:00:02Z (almost 9 years ago)
Original score: 4