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Your narrator compares herself to others. I met Sandy at the coffee shop. I towered over her by a full head. Cheap and simple: Your narrator looks at himself in a mirror. In the bathroom,...
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2019-12-13T12:00:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T05:01:15Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
**Your narrator compares herself to others.** > I met Sandy at the coffee shop. I towered over her by a full head. Cheap and simple: **Your narrator looks at himself in a mirror.** > In the bathroom, I ran a hand through my hair. Still black, just like my dad's, although thinner. He went gray early — nothing for me yet. I had my mom's blue eyes, which was surprising unless you knew I was mostly Welsh. Straightforward: **Your narrator describes himself.** > I caught the guys in the bar looking. They had plenty to look at: tall, blonde, green-eyed, still pretty fit. Not a six-pack, maybe, but not a beer belly either.
#1: Imported from external source
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2016-02-07T13:55:39Z (almost 9 years ago)
Original score: 2