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Q&A Sentence openings variations to avoid repeating determiners and pronounces

Almost all the variations you have are fine. A few notes: A little potato-like nose was planted on his face. The grammar here is correct. However, the combination of "potato" and "planted" wo...

posted 8y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T05:15:45Z (almost 5 years ago)
Almost all the variations you have are fine. A few notes:

> A little potato-like nose was planted on his face.

The grammar here is correct. However, the combination of "potato" and "planted" would only work in a humorous book, where you're constantly joking throughout the narration.

> Nose of his was as big as potato. (Doesn't sound right for my ear)

Correct; you can't say it this way in English.

> The nose was just like potato.

You do have to use the article **a** , as you did in the next example. That carries down to the next two.

> All round him were countless flies that attempted to land on his potato like nose.

"All around" and "potato-like"

Generally speaking, you have the right idea for variations.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2016-05-16T16:38:27Z (over 8 years ago)
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