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You might try Critique Circle, which is a free online critiquing community. (I haven't used it, but others here have.) If you have enough rep, you could ask in our Chat Room, the Overlook Hotel. ...
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You might try [Critique Circle](http://www.critiquecircle.com/), which is a free online critiquing community. (I haven't used it, but others here have.) If you have enough rep, you could ask in our Chat Room, [the Overlook Hotel](http://chat.stackexchange.com/rooms/168/the-overlook-hotel). There are a number of members here who are freelance editors who might be able to work with you.