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In preparation for IELTS I want to write on "It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinctio...
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System
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2019-12-08T05:17:42Z (over 4 years ago)
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clarkson
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2019-12-08T05:17:42Z (over 4 years ago)
In preparation for IELTS I want to write on "It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion" I want to say that although I think sometimes punishment is important, it should not be severe punishment that would affect a child physically or mentally. So if I say in the introduction as "In my opinion, I believe that although sometimes punishment is necessary to guide the children in the right path it should be well thought, accepted and reasonable punishment" do I sound as **partially agreeing**? OR am I being away from the topic?
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System
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2016-05-28T06:24:43Z (almost 8 years ago)
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