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I have the following sentence, NAME is a community that helps each other code better by rating each other's efforts and helps managers pair with other fellow developers I was suggested by ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T05:17:46Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/22167 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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jon220
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2019-12-08T05:17:46Z (over 4 years ago)
I have the following sentence, > NAME is a community that helps each other code better by rating each other's efforts and helps managers pair with other fellow developers I was suggested by the community that the sentence is stylistically poor because the two elements in the sentence are of different syntactic/semantic type. Hence, I have tried to break up the sentence by producing > NAME is a community that helps its members code better by rating each other's efforts. It also helps managers pair with other fellow developers The issue is that I feel there is something odd there, from a writing perspective. It is intended to be a subheading, so I am trying to keep it concise.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-05-28T12:11:51Z (almost 8 years ago)
Original score: 4