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In addition to Mike C. Ford's excellent suggestions, there is a secret technique, misunderstood but effective, known to all professional writers but divulged to few outsiders… Don't show, tell. "...
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System
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2019-12-08T05:19:19Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Lostinfrance
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2019-12-08T05:19:19Z (about 5 years ago)
In addition to Mike C. Ford's excellent suggestions, there is a secret technique, misunderstood but effective, known to all professional writers but divulged to few outsiders… Don't show, tell. _"The city was founded by people from all over the world. Generations had gone by, but not so many that its people all looked the same."_ Job done!
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System
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2016-06-09T18:27:47Z (over 8 years ago)
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